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Darkness is coming, already begun,
Colder and darker, hour by hour,
Air turning cold, bitter and bold,
Red sky Ophelia, what a phenomenon,
Maybe some snow, bring the country to hold,
But let’s not be sad, spiteful or mad,
It happens each year, heater up and just chatA lame attempt, but Mizzy has inspired me with all her poetry
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Your poetry is like you awful
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I liked it xx :)
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i seen a view i thought it looked nice, the first sentence is what i thought when i seen it the rest of the sentences are what i added to it, mine is in bold the non bold is from someone else –
(it looks like fire leaking out the cloud
Heaven met Hell
He looked up and saw fire leaking out of the clouds,
Thunderer rumbled as the angels screamed loud.
then the fire became brighter and brighter
Until the angels fell and the aky became lighter
then something great shown thrw the shaken clouds
slowy moving between the clouds
it made gods virus stand and stare
shocked at what they seen
many fell down hitting on the floor like if some evil dragged them down,
there eye lids closed as if they have been tired for days
while others still there standing staring)
(also i dont like writing and typing and i dont know many words, but anyway be honest i dont think it is a poem more of some pointless story)
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Justnothing….nice, picture beautiful. Thanks for sharing
King… nice for sharing.. umm some hidden talent supposexxx
Good job…..
Lol, translated that means total sh*t :) All good, I am not a poet… That was very nice JN, and the pic
King… nice for sharing.. umm some hidden talent supposexxx Good job…..
King, translation, liked it silly. Where that come? Surprise me with ur talent often. Hee..xx
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Lol, translated that means total sh*t :) All good, I am not a poet… That was very nice JN, and the pic
keep trying, King.
Practice makes perfect.
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