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15 February, 2006 at 8:07 am #2906
Two souls drift, and move together, apart
As the pull of the moon on the tides bring the sea up on the beach
it also brings you into reach
Only to pull you away again
With a power too great to comprehend
And the sun draws the flower into its own warm light
Causing petals to open and catch the rays
As I’m drawn to you in some haunting way
In thought and form I find your light
And bask in warmth
Fires glowing embers fade, and wane
But do not die with patience, caring
Enough to turn one luminous coal
Into a raging blaze between lost souls
Pushing back the velvet night
Brilliant circle of fickle light
As with love that flickers, fades
To burst forth into flame again
Recollections of you have kept a spark
Burning in the deepest recesses of my heart
And away you went, again so soon
Just like the tides,
The pull of the moon.Anon
15 February, 2006 at 1:56 pm #197204Lovely Angel darlin, I really like it x
15 February, 2006 at 8:18 pm #197205Beautiful descriptions in his poem. I love this Angel!
Angelwolf
15 February, 2006 at 10:49 pm #197206Found the author…..by John Selfridge
22 February, 2006 at 2:03 pm #197207I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)
22 February, 2006 at 2:31 pm #197208I really enjoyed reading this one.
For me it spoke of soul mates seperated in body but forever intertwined in spirit. It really got me thinking which is always a good thing.
23 February, 2006 at 8:10 am #197209@william_a_edge wrote:
I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)
I only wish I could write poetry like that William xx
23 February, 2006 at 8:12 am #197210@spanish wrote:
I really enjoyed reading this one.
For me it spoke of soul mates seperated in body but forever intertwined in spirit. It really got me thinking which is always a good thing.
Spanish…..that is EXACTLY wot this poem is about….soulmates seperated in body but not in mind, soul and spirit, I found it for my soulmate and the words just spoke out to me, I’m glad you enjoyed reading it :D
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