move over William.. The New Poets’ in town..

Mj they are ok ,if you feel good about them then that is all that matters ,poetry is what you feel , when others read it they may see something different to what was intended , but that is what it’s all about .
This is just a hint , the verse about the fish wife , take each line and make a verse arond that ( thay don’t have to rhyme you know) then you would have a longer more in depth poem ,keep writing, it makes you feel good-Love William xx

@abitofmary_j wrote:

I am a Scottish Fishwife,
I live my life by the edge of a knife,
I have never longed to be anymans Wife..
So don’t cause me any more strife…

here im a Poet…. lol thats all i could come up with… lol

I read a poem the otherday,
It was full of morals and good ways.
There is no malice or no spite
and the endings always has such bite.

Its seem so easy, like flying a kyte
but alas my efforts are full of SHYTE…
Im on my way now, as I don’t wish to cause a Fight..
As if I continue it will take all Night…

Mary you is completely shyte, give it up babe :twisted:

Only joking Mary darlin, very good, post some more please :D :D

@abitofmary_j wrote:

so I aint winning the Hooker Prize yet then Oss….???? DAM…

here folks this was done in Humour…. not to be taken serious..!

as Im shyte and i know I am…. Im shyte and I know I am… lol

:shock: :lol:

@abitofmary_j wrote:

JMMOG…… OSS…. ill have u know both my children were the Immaculate Conception… that spelt rite… lol.NOW IT IS

HOOKER…. im SHOCKED..!!! iggys Oss…..

Have you really iggy’d me. At bleedin last i have been trying all these years :lol:

@abitofmary_j wrote:

there was this squaddie called Oss’
who badly needed to Floss…
but didnt want to smudge his lip gloss..

lol… here i give up

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