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    ~Relentless Ribbons Of Love ~

    Emerald gems, and velvet tapestries..
    relentless ribbons of love. Turning and curling, disintegrating before reaching
    the polished ivory marble ceiling.

    Crystal mirrors.. silken flowers,
    reflecting their magnificent colors and beauty
    in the radiant surface of the mirrors.
    Quivering flesh..iridescent strands of beautiful curls, contrasting sharply with her white swanlike throat.

    Shapely body exposed when she walked.
    Ribbons of silk, clinging to her naked body,
    like a second skin. Emerald eyes framed by thick black lashes.

    High cheekbones; accentuating the delicate
    surface of her face. White gold and prismatic
    diamonds clinging to her left wrist and throat.
    Diamond tears at her ears, catching the light from chandeliers, and casting it about in all directions.

    Dawn-tinted champagne and fanciful desire.
    Dreamy roses and fleeting memories.
    Daytime erotic fantasies and lustrous red velvet polish.
    “Relentless Ribbons Of Love”. Arching and veering, disintegrating before reaching the distant ceiling.

    Angelwolf

    #198080

    Wonderful AW……awakens the passion inside :D

    #198081

    Thanks Angel…I found this and thought you might like it, it is cute!! You can have it to use!!


    http://i.xanga.com/LadyoftheDawn/angelgonebad.gif

    #198082

    I found it more erotic than passionate. It was if I was sitting on a chair watching her walk by and was kind of undressing her slowly with my eyes.

    Even if I misinterpreted this one, I still loved it, great work again Pam :D :D

    #198083

    @angelwolf00 wrote:

    Thanks Angel…I found this and thought you might like it, it is cute!! You can have it to use!!


    http://i.xanga.com/LadyoftheDawn/angelgonebad.gif

    LOL AW……..I’m as pure as the driven snow me :wink: :lol: Very cute tho……..I’ll save it if ya don’t mind :D

    Hope your well this evening xxxx

    #198084

    Thank you Spanish! I think of it as erotic also. I always loved this poem…it is an old one but it was fun to write!!

    Angelwolf

    #198085

    Whewee!!

    I read this out to myself in the style of an American movie announcer on dope, and boy was it erotic!

    Thanks

    CC

    #198086

    @spanish wrote:

    Even if I misinterpreted this one, I still loved it, great work again Pam :D :D

    I am trying to resist asking what Pam’s Surname is but it’s bluddy difficult :)

    #198087

    I didn’t like it. It made no sense. ribbons dont defy gravity and it relied too
    much on sexual inuendo which ultimately failed to raise it from mediocre.

    #198088

    @james Belfast wrote:

    @spanish wrote:

    Even if I misinterpreted this one, I still loved it, great work again Pam :D :D

    I am trying to resist asking what Pam’s Surname is but it’s bluddy difficult :)

    You’re not thinking ‘Ayres’ too are you :lol: :wink:

    Only joking Pam :D

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