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    So how now do we come to be?

     

    I take your frail hand in mine and we count the stars

    We look up into the darkness with Venus and Mars

    I look into your eyes and remember our time

    All the years I’ve been yours, and you have been mine

     

    With our children all grown and our jobs all done

    We go to bed together and we rise with the sun

    You are my soul mate my rock that keeps me strong

    We guided eachother as we travelled along

     

    Our path and life’s journey will come to an end

    I will see my days out with my one true friend

    My only fear is that I will leave you behind

    As our lives are so very much intertwined

     

    But I know just in death as it will be in life

    You will remain my love, my treasure, my wife

    So now how do we come to be?

    We were made for eachother, we were very lucky

     

    Tonight when I sleep I will hold your hand

    And hope with my heart that God is a kind man

    For if either should die to never awake

    I hope that it is both of us that he will take

     

    I knew it wouldnt ever go that way.

    Written 27 July 2007

    Copywrite SER ©

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    #1074581

    The thing about leaving one’s past behind…is although it takes time some more you will find,

    to fill the void,  to replace the void, you’ll be given what you seek. but it’s a bit like Xmas……you gain nothing if you peek. LOL

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    That’s good, Sarah, but I don’t like the theme.

    That’s just me. It’s a theme whihc sits so badly with my life, the people I’ve known and loved, the hopes I’ve had.

    Tolstoy begins Anna Karenina with a statement (more or less) that all families are happy in the same way, but that an unhappy family is unhappy in its own way. He sees the unhappy families as more interesting – more is going on.

    Once you’ve stated the theme, it can’t go very far. Or rather, it bends to an ill wind to show its strength eg what if one partner is unfaithful, and the other forgives? Now that is more interesting. What if the family loses its livelihood, or falls into debt, o the child is imprisoned for a terrible crime. Just the statement that till death us do part is nice but in itself uninteresting (to me!)

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    #1074700
    just predicted real life before it happened xx
    Some of my poems are like that, I write about stuff and years later they happen.
    maybe its because ive been told I’m a medium and a healer.  Who knows.
    I don’t do all that stuff anymore
    #1074722

    Come to be…..

    Maybe bringing this a little different here

    I be…..
    Finding it difficult to understand a woman who has used modern technology so long…is having the worst time in her life now with it all..

    Being in rooms earlier this morning could chat, respond, back and forth.

    All good, suddenly, thin air, I am being blocked, can not connect, phone shutting down. WiFi challenges. Connecting issues.

    Having few chats ,ladyhm, milkman, cosy, 3…all hell on my services flipped. Can not get into rooms at all…

    So excuse me for here not my intent. Apology to others in room 3, as I am very perplexed why now phone issues. I was able to come this area, so me thinking…umm…

    Not knowing how to reach out, asked someone to let room 3, problems…be known…

    So not sure if got back in area my need to shout out sorry.

    Cosy, sorry…??????not sure what?????

    Milkman will look at area and research what u wanted me to…
    Jersey, be safe..

    Back when can…get in….

    Xxxxxxxx

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