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I always find it amazing when someone writes a poem about something ordinary, and turns it into something enjoyable to read. You did just that William! :lol:Angelwolf
Woo-hoo!! That’s one sensual vampire….! Are you counting the hours to midnight where she will visit you again? I am always afraid to post something like this here because you don’t know how people will react to it! Fantastic job, and I am so glad you posted this one.
You need a night vixen vampire picture for this poem. Here are some….
Since you stated in your poem that she had a white robe on the one above would be perfect!!
Angelwolf
I like this one Oss, the description of a teardrop in all its wonder! I am one of those people that cry when they become happy! It can get embarassing :lol:Angelwolf
You know sometimes you read a poem and the words just hit home and make the poem special. Well…this is that kind of poem, I like to call them “WOW” poems. This poem is sad but beautiful…..Angelwolf
Unique title to your poem..”A Suite Tale”…it fits the poem perfectly. I enjoyed this one…The last verse is my favorite:
“A rather unfortunate conclusion
They wish the deed was not done
Because the design became common
Thus everybody want’s one”Angelwolf
Hi William,BRAVO!!! This poem is fantastic, it’s cute, it’s funny and it’s creative!! I like the creative way you put the words at the end, and they were similar having a “tion” on the end of them.
Angelwolf
Dawny what a delight to have your signature on here, I love it, and thanks for the comment!!Angelwolf
This is incredibly sad and tragic, I wonder what inspired this poem? Good poem Oss… and the words just left me with sorrow!!Angelwolf
Hi Lou-Lou….Some strong emotions in this one…I like the way you describe how you feel!!
Angelwolf
Thanks Angel!!Yes it is a vampire poem..I am a big Anne Rice fan! Have read all her books…
Angelwolf
