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27 February, 2008 at 8:22 am #311705
Excellent Cath!
Some really great stuff being posted here ppl.. keep it up :) .I’m in total agreement with mims on the importance of a lyrical quality to poetry – curiously enough, a vast percentage of the works posted on this thread to date bear witness to it.
Oh and grateful appreciation for the wonderful Ted Hughes poem posted by Esmeralda
:) ..27 February, 2008 at 8:15 am #279427Super tunes there rubyboobs :) …
I’ll be starting an All Things Irish thread for Paddy’s day coming up :D ..
I trust you’ll be in fine voice girl xx
25 February, 2008 at 2:34 am #311693Lovesong
He loved her and she loved him.
His kisses sucked out her whole past and future or tried to
He had no other appetite
She bit him she gnawed him she sucked
She wanted him complete inside her
Safe and sure forever and ever
Their little cries fluttered into the curtainsHer eyes wanted nothing to get away
Her looks nailed down his hands his wrists his elbows
He gripped her hard so that life
Should not drag her from that moment
He wanted all future to cease
He wanted to topple with his arms round her
Off that moment’s brink and into nothing
Or everlasting or whatever there wasHer embrace was an immense press
To print him into her bones
His smiles were the garrets of a fairy palace
Where the real world would never come
Her smiles were spider bites
So he would lie still till she felt hungry
His words were occupying armies
Her laughs were an assassin’s attempts
His looks were bullets daggers of revenge
His glances were ghosts in the corner with horrible secrets
His whispers were whips and jackboots
Her kisses were lawyers steadily writing
His caresses were the last hooks of a castaway
Her love-tricks were the grinding of locks
And their deep cries crawled over the floors
Like an animal dragging a great trap
His promises were the surgeon’s gag
Her promises took the top off his skull
She would get a brooch made of it
His vows pulled out all her sinews
He showed her how to make a love-knot
Her vows put his eyes in formalin
At the back of her secret drawer
Their screams stuck in the wallTheir heads fell apart into sleep like the two halves
Of a lopped melon, but love is hard to stopIn their entwined sleep they exchanged arms and legs
In their dreams their brains took each other hostageIn the morning they wore each other’s face
24 February, 2008 at 1:32 am #159772After being quite a while here I do feel very old… yet I’m only 36 …
What’s that in JC Years I wonder?
:?
:P
23 February, 2008 at 11:28 pm #139483Castles In The Air
And if she asks you why
You can tell her that I told you
That I’m tired of castles in the air
I’ve got a dream I want the world to share
And castle walls just lead me to despairHills of forest green where the mountains touch the sky
A dream come true
I’ll live there till I die
I’m asking you to say my last goodbye
The love we knew ain’t worth another trySave me from all the trouble and the pain
I know I’m weak
But I can’t face that girl again
Tell her the reasons why I can’t remain
Perhaps she’ll understand
If you tell it to her plainBut how can words express the feel of sunlight in the morning
In the hills away from city strife
I need a country woman for my wife
I’m city born but I love the country lifeFor I will not be part of her cocktail generation
Partners waltz devoid of all romance
The music plays and everyone must dance
I’m bowing out
I need a second chanceSave me from all the trouble and the pain
I know I’m weak
But I can’t face that girl again
Tell her the reasons why I can’t remain
Perhaps she’ll understand
If you tell it to her plainAnd if she asks you why
You can tell her that I told you
That I’m tired of castles in the air
I’ve got a dream I want the world to share
And castle walls just lead me to despairDon McClean
22 February, 2008 at 8:15 am #313191@kateee wrote:
* cums dribbles droooooooooooools and swooooooooooooooooons over studley smiles and leaves*……….yum yum yum
:D
21 February, 2008 at 9:04 pm #27941221 February, 2008 at 4:28 pm #279411@pats wrote:
THE BRIT AWARDS………a few clips from last nights show. amy winehouse was awesome…..terrific set by mark ronson……wet me knickers at gary barlow and david tennant :P :P :oops: :P mika was class……an omg i’m turning into sunny..is rihanna sha/ggable or what!! =P~ kylie is okayish……arctic monkeys pissed as coonts lol but well deserved win…..loved sharon osbourne tellin vic reeves to pi/ss off you drunken bas/tard.when he messed up his intro :lol: adele is gonna be big(well bigger than she already is :wink: ) this year. only bu/m note……sharonnnnnnnnnnnnnn…….ffs where does kelly get her dress sense :shock: :shock: certainly not from her mother!!!!ozzy rocks!!!!!!!……….and of course for sgt pepper…the grt paul mcartney closing the show.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_puCZQ6Z3xs
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hfbZW_WY1iw
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cfZcNcx2LZs
Great post PATS 8)
Excellent critique =D>
21 February, 2008 at 2:08 am #313189@metallica wrote:
Dunno wot all the fuss is about tbh, everyone knows sgt is a pillow biter… (or was that just a rumour started by….. me?)
8-[
maybe just a little nibble now and again..
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21 February, 2008 at 2:06 am #281502:lol: :lol: Two uber tunes Rubes lol
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