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Thought id try something different out for one of my poems, although my image has gone a bit dodgepot may need replacing :oops: :shock: was my first go with this thing :lol:
love it tempty :D it does move on a bit quick for me though, I like to read poetry slowly and understand it….. I had to go back a couple of times…. it a great poem, clever sod 8)
grrrrrrr it’s too quick for me tempty darlin………email it to me please xx
:D thanks for the comments giggles glad you liked it, im gonna redo it and see if i can slow it down a bit or even remove the text animation, that was a tester i threw together and i didnt get round to reading the instructions as yet for the program :lol:
angel the poem is here,
The clown girl is on show tonight
She breezes in, smiles, as always
Caresses the room, creates laughter
Happy to give a piece of her soul
to open hearts, she plays her role
But the clown fascade grows weary
and icy tears encased by time ,
sit in corners of once smiling blues
The mirrors of her acheing head
now cold, where once fire burned
where light jumped and flickered, dead
The clown girl sits and wonders
why the magic fades so fast, wont last
existance in limbo, so persistant
enslaved, a prisoner of her past.Tempt xxxx
Temptress..so you write dark poetry, I love it!! I much rather read a dark piece than anything else. The icey tears encased by time is a great line!
See you on the dark side :lol:
Angelwolf
Brave Tempty, very brave xx
:D :D hiya angelwolf, i dont know about dark i tend to just right whatever is in my head at the time(including spelling mistakes and bad grammar pml) :lol: thanks for your input :D
Always said there was more to you than meets the eye tempty….cool poem, we all have two faces in some respect, one for ourselves and one for everyone else xxxx
:D hiya angel xxxx wasnt so much the two faces it was more the hideing behind laughter as a defense, things arnt as bad when you make others smile and laugh, until they arnt there and your left alone with who you really are and what troubles you. I guess people deal with things in different ways, its just one of the ways some people cope with the shyte that gets thrown at them :wink:
:-s waffle over lol
@temptress wrote:
:D hiya angel xxxx wasnt so much the two faces it was more the hideing behind laughter as a defense, things arnt as bad when you make others smile and laugh, until they arnt there and your left alone with who you really are and what troubles you. I guess people deal with things in different ways, its just one of the ways some people cope with the shyte that gets thrown at them :wink:
:-s waffle over lol
I know exactly where your comin from darlin……and I’m bloody lovin your new siggy pic :wink:
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