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  • 23 February, 2006 at 8:45 am #3014

    William_A_Edge

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    23 February, 2006 at 11:10 am #199190

    angelwolf00



    I always find it amazing when someone writes a poem about something ordinary, and turns it into something enjoyable to read. You did just that William! :lol:

    Angelwolf

    23 February, 2006 at 1:59 pm #199191

    William_A_Edge


    Thanx so much ,give mine a knock sometime LOL-Love William :oops:

    23 February, 2006 at 5:33 pm #199192

    angelwolf00


    Ok…write a bad poem and we shall see if I can knock it. :lol: William I almost NEVER give unfavorable remarks on poems, the reason is I see the good and beauty in most poems I read. I read some with horrible spelling, and some with no cadence, and some that have no meter….but there’s always something I see that is special and different about the poem.

    Besides I figure there’s plenty of people who like to pick a poem apart, and say what THEY think needs to be done to improve the poem. I leave that to those kinds of people!

    Angelwolf

    23 February, 2006 at 5:47 pm #199193

    angel

    @william_a_edge wrote:


    Ah! my friend ,can I ask a boon of you
    Would you open the door , for me to get through
    You see my friend , my hands are full
    The door opens out so you have to pull

    I’ve never asked much of you before
    But I’m asking you now to open the door
    Do you think I would stand here static
    If the door was automatic

    I know in the town some doors revolve
    Just think of the problems that would solve
    But my friend ,I do you implore
    Just open for me the PERISHING DOOR

    by William A Edge

    Made me chuckle :lol:

    23 February, 2006 at 5:53 pm #199194

    Oss

    Very good indeed, i can imagine me doing it, which brings the poem to life i suppose.

    23 February, 2006 at 6:51 pm #199195

    ccvulture

    William

    This is a simple appeal, and it really does come off. I liked it a lot.

    Thanks

    CC

    23 February, 2006 at 11:11 pm #199196

    William_A_Edge


    I’m sure you know all about love Si’an -friends eh! -Love William :oops:

    24 February, 2006 at 8:11 am #199197

    William_A_Edge


    Funny you should say that Si’an , I am on 14 tablets a day , but I am OK as long as I remember to take them , it’s against my principles ,but after being rushed to hospital twice I have no option-Love William :)

    24 February, 2006 at 11:00 pm #199198

    William_A_Edge


    Thank you for your concern si’an , I was rushed into hospital twice in 2003 and have been on tablets ever since , but I still coach young footballers , the only time I have any problem is if I forget to take a tablet ,so I must conclude they have controlled my problems -Love William :)

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