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  • 6 March, 2006 at 12:14 pm #3213

    angelwolf00



    ~ Leaving Me Breathless ~

    Leaving me breathless as can be,
    When only your love my eyes can see.
    Breathless with passion and desire,
    Filled with love and such a flaming fire.

    My heart free with the power so true,
    Letting down my guard as I look at you.
    Breathless with emotion deep within,
    Love for you to be felt over and over again.

    To you my love, my heart goes free,
    As you make me feel the way I wish to be.

    Angelwolf

    6 March, 2006 at 12:47 pm #201664

    The Observer

    Lovely poem again :)

    My variation on your theme…….

    Puffing and Panting

    I am not as young as once I was
    and my libido has waned somewhat
    I craved your body night and day
    and for you I was always hot

    I remember lasting hours and hours
    trantic sex a chanting
    but now it’s over in just a trite
    with lots of puffing and panting

    signed

    ‘The 5 minute wonder’

    6 March, 2006 at 12:54 pm #201665

    angelwolf00


    Oh my goodness your poem made me smile!! A lot of good stuff can happen in 5 minutes!! Yee-ha!! :lol: :lol:

    Angelwolf

    6 March, 2006 at 12:58 pm #201666

    The Observer

    The 5 minutes referred to how long it took me to write it :wink:

    I am glad I have made you smile :D

    Oh and I just found out you are American 8)

    Yee-ha as you say!!! :wink:

    6 March, 2006 at 9:16 pm #201667

    angelwolf00

    Yes I am American don’t hold that against me! :cry: Oh..if it only took you 5 minutes then you are a pro! :lol:

    Angelwolf

    7 March, 2006 at 8:17 pm #201668

    The Observer

    Crikey NO I welcome your posts and I fear I may have prevented others from posting on your poem. It was very good and up to your usual standard.

    I have even gone so far as to check out your web link and I think it is you that is the pro :wink:

    7 March, 2006 at 9:41 pm #201669

    angelwolf00

    Hi there Observer!
    Looks like it is just you and me on this thread. Perhaps this poem is a little to sensual, I always liked this one. Thanks for reading my poems, there’s a lot of them to go through!! :lol: You are a sweetie!

    Angelwolf

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