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Forget your inhibition
cast out the indescision
Take joy in your new position
Of this you can be sureFrom your new location
Reassess your own vocation
Through meaning’s lost in translation
dwell on it no moreSit back and enjoy the vacation
Take time for relaxation
At this beautiful destination
Just don’t take the tourYour poison running
down my throat
so sickly sweet
that I just want to choke.
You’re my angel in blackYour touch burns its path
across my skin
with your heart of stone
loving you is my sin
You’re my angel in blackYour icy shrapnel flows
and cuts through my vein
it’s clear now that you
have driven me insane
You’re my angel in blackDespite the monster
that you have become
I keep my promise
you’re my only and one
Because… you’re my angel
… but only in blackcaught in the dervish
of time and space
lost in the melee
that consists the human racedevoid of purpose,
providence or cause
watching the idiot box flicker
as the world wages warsspinning on an axis
the spiral’s descent
the attrocity of sin so great
humanity lamentsFFS!
hey I have the right to post my bad poetry (yes I know its bad) on this site, if you don’t like it then may I point out that nobody is forcing you to read them
How do you know that ‘FFS!’ isn’t actually an excercise in brevity in poetry? :roll:
hmm, as in a statement designed to go against the entire traditional view point of poetic structure in an attempt to strike out at conformity and unoriginal thought whilst retaining the full effect of its dramatic impact… either that or you’re taking the pi55 :wink:
brevity ? WHAT brevity.. ..its like a wee poyum ..
there was a wee cooper that came fae Fife,,
knickety knackety noo noo noo .I likes ya style forget-me-not
yeah!!
not so bad considering I only spend a minute on each one (apart from the haikus of course) :wink:
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