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Lets set the scene for all those lacking any in any imagination, we can paint a picture
We c an overpower, conquer and overwhelm whoever reads this with the bible quotes and ‘scripture’
Or maybe just maybe we can DOMINATE their mind with our political views even though our views DO NOT MATTER we can flatter we can natter – we can chatter
Ok so here goes the way it is then, the MAN stood next to a big tree and thought about shi*
He felt all intelligent but he lacked any substance energy conviction or any WIT
But he was SOOO much better and so much grander and he could canter, like a horse GALLOPPING OFF MAKING A POINT TRYING TO WIN THE ‘RACE’
It’s not like with a dog they don’t have a carrot and some bast**d will shoot them when they get lame such is the ‘GAME’ probably in their poor horsie face
Inner depth oh inner depth this world is full of people trying to PROVE they have some.
LOOK AT ME LOOK AT ME LOOK IM SO CLEVER I HAVE VIEWS AND OPINIONS BUT I REALLY HAVE NONE
I am just trying FAR TOO HARD oh oh oh people love intelligence and I don’t have any wealth so all I have is my ignorant opinions and my hate
I am the wise I am the great I MUST BERATE
Don’t you just hate the ‘biased’ the ‘stupid’ the ‘lame’
Why won’t they be as clever as me and play the ‘game’
I could listen to you, ‘jesus’ ‘god’ did we forget about that fella near the big tree?
Gosh wasn’t he doing something really interesting watching the leaves falling so peacefully?
I’m sure his heart sighed like a breath of a million heartbeats dimming once he saw the sunshine dying and a new day beginning?
If I wrote like that would I be winning?
When I exhale I see angels dancing into the air making me wish I had no body and I was free?
I want to take one breath and inhale someone into me?
Forever and ever and to not be undone?
Oh you can write deep cr*p you’re not the only ones
But reflect subject and do all you can to be deflective
At the end of the day poetry is objective
So, kiss my ar**
Yes I am aware this poem didn’t always flow and I even had a line that didn’t rhyme. So shoot me. I will shoot you back later J 0h and what more I’ve been writing since I was 12 and been on many many poetry writing forums. I think you look fat, yeah I said it. Don’t wear that out in public. Lol
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I enjoyed that..you do have talent.
It doesn’t matter about rhyme. Rhyme is just one part of a poem.
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I write crap poetry, I am mental and thick. I’m probably still funnier and better looking than you are. but I write my poetry cos it really means something to me. I have passion and feeling what do you do? appeal to the masses are you trying to imitate the greats? oh you fool you need to realise you cant ever write what has been written before. if its not from the heart you may as well give up. of course what we write only means anything to us but wouldn’t it be nice if people had some kind of reaction to what we wrote? that’s why I write the way I do. but yes I could be deep and write more I am a writer I think orson you have forgotten why we write x
that wasn’t directed at you sg
Doesn’t matter if it were directed at me.
It would fit me too, I guess, so it may as well be directed at me.
You have the gift of spontaneity in your imagination.
lol ive actually been hacked lol, but by someone interesting lol
kiss me touch me, be with me, just make me want to be with you
I like to get into the character of a poem like watching a great film, enjoying the story or message and seeing it flow like the waves around the shore of the beach. Enjoy it for the beauty of what it is. I mean, it’s your creation…who am i to tell you what you should have done with it? I can’t picture what you picture as what you pictured is unique to you.
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