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    a thoushand broken hearts
    light your path to the truth
    that everyone in this world
    can feel the same as you

    Love can be so cruel
    if it does not come to reach us
    it never comes as easy
    as it does in the films and the books
    but its somthing worth beleiving
    if you keep your eyes open

    so tonight before you sleep
    you can be a part of you and me
    if you put your arms around me

    #185797

    Thats lovely soulie

    #185798

    naghhh… thought it was shyte myself :)

    #185799

    WOW, imagine what you could do with extra time! I enjoyed this!

    Angelwolf

    #185800

    Oss

    60 seconds – you gotta write something in 60 seconds Mmmm

    I stand before a woman
    Knockout beauty she is
    She sees beofre her a man
    A tramp he is

    I glance my eyes downward
    as though i should not see
    She pulls my head forward
    Asks what is wrong with me

    Nothing wrong with you i reply
    Tis me, i should not stand before you
    Oh really she says, Why?
    you are happy and i am blue

    How can i smile
    if a man as lovely as you
    lives in denial
    when the truth is i am blue

    (thats all i could manage in 60 seconds i need more time to finish it buggery) :evil:

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