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29 January, 2006 at 12:46 pm #2654
a thoushand broken hearts
light your path to the truth
that everyone in this world
can feel the same as youLove can be so cruel
if it does not come to reach us
it never comes as easy
as it does in the films and the books
but its somthing worth beleiving
if you keep your eyes openso tonight before you sleep
you can be a part of you and me
if you put your arms around me29 January, 2006 at 12:48 pm #185797Thats lovely soulie
29 January, 2006 at 1:07 pm #185798naghhh… thought it was shyte myself :)
6 February, 2006 at 12:53 pm #185799WOW, imagine what you could do with extra time! I enjoyed this!
Angelwolf
6 February, 2006 at 2:32 pm #18580060 seconds – you gotta write something in 60 seconds Mmmm
I stand before a woman
Knockout beauty she is
She sees beofre her a man
A tramp he isI glance my eyes downward
as though i should not see
She pulls my head forward
Asks what is wrong with meNothing wrong with you i reply
Tis me, i should not stand before you
Oh really she says, Why?
you are happy and i am blueHow can i smile
if a man as lovely as you
lives in denial
when the truth is i am blue(thats all i could manage in 60 seconds i need more time to finish it buggery) :evil:
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