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    Underestimated

    (written a while ago but posting as I like it)

     

    Shes not yours to control

    You dont possess her soul

    You were so misguided

    Because she was undecided

    So foolish to think

    Cos she liked her drink

     

    She grew stupid and blind

    You used her to unwind

    Blowing and bowing scraped her knees on the ground

    Sure she had her moments but her mind was quite sound

    Tactics and strategies from ever angle

    Constant pressures caught up, like rinsing clothes in a mangle

     

    Do I as I say or you will not be loved

    From pillar to post every which way she was shoved

    React react show us your face

    You are not listening and that is not to my taste

    Every option tried every method used

    She was doing so well once allowed to be used

     

    Her purpose was great

    Was all dished out on a plate

    Every piece of pie gone

    She gave up, tried to move on

    Walking down memory lane

    Far too much for any mind to sustain

     

    Had to sink before learning

    Tried to swim skin was burning

    Endless tears of frustration

    Endless tears of devastation

    And the sweetness and light

    Cried and cried through the night

     

    Dont you punish or goad

    Just to lesson your load

    When that body was broken

    You just want your words spoken

    And your needs heard and met

    And you dont understand yet

     

    We all walk in our shoes

    We live by our own rules

    She is not the porridge pot

    Endless food piping hot

    When drained of every hope and will

    Dont try to hit her with the restaurant bill

     

    Copywrite SER

    I could explain what this poem is about but I am hoping that I shouldn’t have to.

    Remember poetry is objective.

    Boards were proper crap anyway tbh.

     

     

    #1077635

    Some times…..when your at the end of your tether, it’s time to experience a different type of weather. We’re all under the actual weather geographical speaking………question is…..does one need to ask or is one just allowed…to hold a brolly under some one else’s cloud?

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    #1077650

    cool xx

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    #1077782

    READ READ READ READ

    TO NO ONE IN PARTICULAR

    READ IT ABSORB IT

    LEARN

    #1077791

    Hit her with the restaurant bill was funny……..that really happen Sarah?

    #1077793

    Jack and Jill went up the hill…….then it was time to eat and Jack never  payed the bill. Jill said.Jack come back you silly pratt…..in this day we’re all pretty thrifty…tell you what….we’ll go fifty- fifty.

    Jack said….. honey…..it ain’t about the money…..i’ll go plenty if you can go twenty……looks like the future’s a meeting of minds……….just don’t mix metal with metal…it grinds.

    Some times or many times…what you say…many interpret the wrong way…let’s finish this rhyme with the classic…you all have a great day.

    #1077803

    Hit her with the restaurant bill was funny……..that really happen Sarah?

    Yes and no

    The poem is about being in a controlling toxic relationship whereby when you do not conform they punish you by withholding attention and affection/support.

    They ignore you and threaten you by taking their love away from you or by telling you that if you don’t do as they say or want there will be repercussions.

    Ive gone out for a meal before with my ex and had them sit there and abuse me tell me all my faults be really nasty to me and then ive paid the bill for a really horrible evening, namely the time I got a pay rise and I thought that was a good thing but he resented me for it and told me I was making him feel bad for being excited about it.

    My message to ANYONE in a controlling relationship is

    GET OUT whilst you are young enough to start again.  But odds are that you will be totally mentally screwed up for much time afterwards and you will never trust anyone ever again but the really really good thing is:

    You will recognise when someone comes along and tries to do it to you again.

    So, HAPPY DAYS

    :yahoo:

    #1077891

    I know this has nothing to do with your post although in a way it does…Happy Days was an awesome show LOL. Used to look forward to the theme tune…the ole juke box and theme song. Saw an episode the other day and laughed til i cried. Or was it cry til i laughed…hard to work out some times. Any way, it was an amazing show…awesome indeed.

    #1077892

    Thing is about toxicity……if you stay there too long you’ll die. That’s what toxic does. Some times it kills you fast, some times slowly but the end result is the same. I’ve always found with any thing or any one toxic toxic is that the more one uses alkali, the toxicity will have less power until it has no power at all. The thing about toxins is that they attack…it’s what they do.

    Who let the fox in? it must be a toxin…..prepared to attack and always on your back.

    A fox goes for the neck..that ain’t no high tech….it’s what it’s always done…..and to the the life of a hen..that can’t be much fun.

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    #1077893

    Im no spring chicken.

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