angel

awww I liked that oss……very different for you hun xxxx

Ello temty darlin……I hope that siggy pic does stay for a while…..she really is a Temptress :wink: And I’m doin great thank hun…..me and the bump :D xxxx

awwww thanks very much….I’m a rite soppy sod, and a true romantic, and yes I am very much in love….and of course he’s a lucky bugger :wink: :lol: :lol:

Thank you both for your comments, means alot coming from such true poets as yourselves :D

Fantastic pics AW :D

ooooooooh love this one AW! And wot a beautiful picture too, conjures up the image in your head xx

@William_A_Edge wrote:

I thought you said you can’t write poetry , this is brill Angel-Love William :)

LOL thanks William…..it’s a very old poem x

Thanks William…..have a lovely day yourself :)

awwww that made me think about the squirrels that are abound where I work :D

Very interesting poem William….is it based on real events?

@Spanish wrote:

I really enjoyed reading this one.

For me it spoke of soul mates seperated in body but forever intertwined in spirit. It really got me thinking which is always a good thing.

Spanish…..that is EXACTLY wot this poem is about….soulmates seperated in body but not in mind, soul and spirit, I found it for my soulmate and the words…[Read more]

@William_A_Edge wrote:

I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)

I only wish I could write poetry like that William xx

@Temptress wrote:

:D hiya angel xxxx wasnt so much the two faces it was more the hideing behind laughter as a defense, things arnt as bad when you make others smile and laugh, until they arnt there and your left alone with who you really are and what troubles you. I guess people deal with things in different ways, its just one of the ways some…

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@Oss wrote:

TEAR DROP

It’s not often you see me
Apart from when emotions run high
Extreme moments of sadness
Outrageous moments of joy
When I do appear
My journey is not long
The sight of me though
Brings attention to my host
I can be brushed aside
Even soaked up
Released from the eye
Just left to drop
See right through me you can
For I
I am j…

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Very erotic poem there William…..certainly woke me up :oops: :lol:

@William_A_Edge wrote:

While I realise folk are intitled to their opinion once you change a poem to suit another it is no longer yours , for poetry like any other medium is the thoughts of the author ,how the author sees it is the only way , other wise there is no point , we would all write exactly the same

Agreed :)

Another gud one William, I liked this verse..

It seems the cow that it came from
When shot was against a wire fence
This left a lasting impression
On the hide,and remains there hence :lol:

Very good William, made me chuckle…….I have to go to the Dentist very soon aswell :lol:

Welcome to the boards…..look forward to reading more of your work :D

@James Belfast wrote:

@angel* wrote:

@James Belfast wrote:

I am confused (not difficult). Is Oss G J Smith? Yes or No please.

Yes James, oss is G J Smith……that’s his real name hun, and he does write his own poetry

Ok thanks angel. Technically, I suppose his poetry is rough around the edges (what do I know?) but it is certainly emotional and…

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@PATS wrote:

these song lyrics always remind me of my son.

Every night in my dreams
I see you. I feel you.
That is how I know you go on.

Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on.

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you’re here in my heart
And…

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I’m no critic CCV…..totally get part 1 and loved it…….will re-read part 2……nice to see something different on here :)