Artful Dodger

no fucking clue im thick ask milkman

mind you he is dating some old ugly prick from the usa with no teeth and hes that desperate he thinks hes lucky.

shes 2 years older short and nasty looking cos Mario told me he saw her on webcam.

poor milkman is that desperate no wonder he is so fucked up right now

silly that wasn’t me

id never do that read it all back

your special needs is getting in your way xx

id never use the word glow I was trying to help a woman with a shit poem make it good

anyway knob

ok

I have no qualifications in English literature language theatre studies or history or IT.  I have no  qualifications I cant even t…[Read more]

I am a very talented writer I can write anything test me x

try me x

I made you look like a total cunt x

mind you that was not hard x

will take you so long to match my words

the fact you are even attempting is so absurd

you have no talent no skill or personality

you were not ever any match for me

you had to settle for some old lady without any teeth

you are a troll and a horrible man sitting there beneath

no one cares about what you have to say

no one likes you…[Read more]

I am so talented I don’t need to think x

well

as  beautiful and as talented as you think you are,

your a silly cunt and you cant even drive a car

so why don’t we say that I cannot write

after me putting you in your place tonight

took me two seconds to write what I have just written

quicker than the benefits you been given

bless you for trying to show me up

compared to your very…[Read more]

how can you stomach it here

ok so you are commenting on this thread why?

sorry x

what is your question?

I am asking but please know I don’t actually care at all x

actually no you cant

so shut up

when you can write like me and are me then you can

til then, no

I value creativity in others, people who lack it do not interest me.

ask the poetical writers a  question x

don’t ask me a question x

im not  poet

I have no idea about poetry

I will just ignore you

yes?

A good poem makes sense.

Let your creativity take you places but always make sure that you words make sense.

Select a topic, its often easier to write when another person gives you a title.

And remember that feelings emotions and descriptions are different things.

Explain an emotion.  Don’t assume the reader will know what you are talking…[Read more]

rewtite

love is like a flower, we long for it to grow
we cherish when it flourishes, we hope it blooms although
as each day comes we long for it to thrive

we long to see that it is still alive
so we hope to keep that beauty a glow

we tender it to try to make it so

we watch and hope our love is not lost
and not killed dead by life’s weathering…[Read more]

LOVE is like a flower as we watch it grow.. As each day comes we watch it more grow… as each day it blooms more we know…

repetition of the word ‘grow’ and if you sat and watched a flower grow it would take forever.  do you actually watch it grow?  Over time you ‘watch it grow’ so state that as its the truth.  We don’t watch it grow, unless…[Read more]

From your pic you have really nice hair plus you love everyone.  I bet you can make a really good heart out of playdoh.

Keep writing x I have really enjoyed analysing your effort x

I am no expect in fact I know nothing about poetry at all.

I just make sense.

Next literal masterpiece please!!!!!!!

Some people are born musically talented, some are born to create artistic masterpieces and some people are born writers.

I am sure that you will find where you slot in sassey x

Some of the people in this world are just created purely for decoration.

I am sure that is not the case for you.

I do not know you very well, maybe you are a whizz with…[Read more]

What a nice poem.  It is always a wonderful thing when people put into words their feelings and thoughts.  Creativity can often flow leading us into a greater understanding into who and what we are.

I hope you do not mind if I add some comments to it?  A tiny bit of critique?  Poetry although totally objective still needs to make some sense and…[Read more]

Tracy’s horrible face was posted all over facebook – she had control over who saw her horrible face and everyone saw them as they were voluntarily posted on social media with her knowledge and permission.  Mizzy’s horrible tits were posted up without her knowledge or permission by someone who took the pics without her permission.  She had no c…[Read more]

Not aimed at you.  I respect you.

The trouble with ‘drinkers’ and with people who ‘get depressed’ is that they tend to compare themselves to others and generalise.  No one can understand anyone else until they have walked in their shoes.  But they bleet on and on. Even the drinkers and the mentally ill have the cheek to judge others.  As far as I am concerned, treat people as th…[Read more]