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Thank you very much for both the compliment and the criticism, I appreciated both in equal degrees. I hadn’t read Blake until I followed your link, but he is magnificent! Thank you for the heads up. Perhaps I’ll post a revised addition if I can get some more input.

thank you! Any critique is appreciated, but esp. when it could help me write better.

Please critique, or just give your opinion, good or bad, I’m thick-skinned. PLEASE!