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A ‘dab’ sounds vaguely disrespectful, and the photo of the mass ‘dab’ looks a bit strange.

I know it’s all in a good cause, but still…

A ‘dab’ sounds vaguely disrespectful, and the photo of the mass ‘dab’ looks a bit strange.

I know it’s all in a good cause.

I love this your so romantic xox

Love ❤️ this xox

Can’t see to read

beautiful

Suych a beautiful poem.

Was the title Becky, or was it maximum length 5 inches on a good day???

You have a very romantic style, dexy.

That’s interesting.

You read it more sharply than the author.

I put that line in because it sounded good, without thinking very clearly about it.

Then my litcrit mind got to work and wagged my finger at myself.

but you’re right. I think lol.

ya live and ya learn.

That’s interesting.

You read it more sharply than the author.

I put that line in because it sounded good, without thinking very clearly about it.

Then my litcrit mind got to work and wagged my giner at myself.

but you’re right. I think lol.

ya live and ya learn.

I’m very aware of the weaknesses of the poem, but at leat I wrote it.

A softly beating centre, for example, is hardly silence.

Twas a first draft. Maybe I’ll work on it.

I say you’re the inspiration, mizzy, because when you first started writing poems here, you said that writing by the rules of litcrit removed the whole point of writing a poem.…[Read more]

haha.

I was expecting a different type of ‘hanging on’, but that was hilarious.

haha.

I was expecting a different type of poem, but that was hilarious.

Dexy, you seem to have forgotten to add the attachment.

Yes, mister q

And quickly,

which is how I feel mizzy writes her poems.

At least I think she does.

Apart from a haiku a few years ago, also in jc, it’s the first I’ve written since I was 17 – I think.

Mizzy was pushing me for a while earlier this year, but I resisted,.

And then, for some unknown reason, i did it.

So I owe this to mizzy,…[Read more]

I’m not so keen on political poems.

Some political poems are good, but usually they do nothing for me.

That’s me, not the poem.

I liked your other two.

You got me to write a poem, though, Sarah, mediocre but a poem, so thanks for that x

I’m not so keen on political poems.

Some political poems are good, but usually they do nothing for me.

That’s me, not the poem.

You got me to write a poem, though, Sarah, mediocre but a poem, so thanks for that x

I knew someone who had been in Yugoslavia during the last war. A very very nasty war in that country, with a million killed.

He was fighting with the Partisans – the Communist forces under Tito.

He told me that once he was with a group of partisans in a cave as German soldiers were searching just outside. They had a German prisoner with them,…[Read more]

I knew someone who had been in Yugoslavia during the last war. A very very nasty war in that country, with a million killed.

He was fighting with the Partisans – the Communist forces under Tito.

He told me that once he was with a group of partisans in a cave as German soldiers were searching just outside. They had a German prisoner with them,…[Read more]

I knew someone who had been in Yugoslavia during the last war. A very very nasty war in that country, with a million killed.

He was fighting with the Partisans – the Communist forces under Tito.

He told me that once he was with a group of partisans in a cave as German soldiers were searching just outside. They had a German prisoner with them,…[Read more]