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sceptical guy replied to the topic Mass 'dab' for boy who died in his sleep in the forum Getting serious 8 years, 5 months ago
A ‘dab’ sounds vaguely disrespectful, and the photo of the mass ‘dab’ looks a bit strange.
I know it’s all in a good cause, but still…
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Mass 'dab' for boy who died in his sleep in the forum Getting serious 8 years, 5 months ago
A ‘dab’ sounds vaguely disrespectful, and the photo of the mass ‘dab’ looks a bit strange.
I know it’s all in a good cause.
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Sassey replied to the topic waterfall prt 2 in the forum Say hello! 8 years, 5 months ago
I love this your so romantic xox
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Sassey replied to the topic 3rd try in the forum Say hello! 8 years, 5 months ago
Love ❤️ this xox
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Sassey replied to the topic dexy poem in the forum Say hello! 8 years, 5 months ago
Can’t see to read
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Grandma in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
beautiful
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sceptical guy replied to the topic maximum length 5 inches on a good day in the forum Say hello! 8 years, 5 months ago
Suych a beautiful poem.
Was the title Becky, or was it maximum length 5 inches on a good day???
You have a very romantic style, dexy.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Silence in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
That’s interesting.
You read it more sharply than the author.
I put that line in because it sounded good, without thinking very clearly about it.
Then my litcrit mind got to work and wagged my finger at myself.
but you’re right. I think lol.
ya live and ya learn.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Silence in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
That’s interesting.
You read it more sharply than the author.
I put that line in because it sounded good, without thinking very clearly about it.
Then my litcrit mind got to work and wagged my giner at myself.
but you’re right. I think lol.
ya live and ya learn.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Silence in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m very aware of the weaknesses of the poem, but at leat I wrote it.
A softly beating centre, for example, is hardly silence.
Twas a first draft. Maybe I’ll work on it.
I say you’re the inspiration, mizzy, because when you first started writing poems here, you said that writing by the rules of litcrit removed the whole point of writing a poem.…[Read more]
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Hanging on in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
haha.
I was expecting a different type of ‘hanging on’, but that was hilarious.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Hanging on in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
haha.
I was expecting a different type of poem, but that was hilarious.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic dexy poem 2 , beauty by candlelight in the forum Say hello! 8 years, 5 months ago
Dexy, you seem to have forgotten to add the attachment.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Silence in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
Yes, mister q
And quickly,
which is how I feel mizzy writes her poems.
At least I think she does.
Apart from a haiku a few years ago, also in jc, it’s the first I’ve written since I was 17 – I think.
Mizzy was pushing me for a while earlier this year, but I resisted,.
And then, for some unknown reason, i did it.
So I owe this to mizzy,…[Read more]
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Cry in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m not so keen on political poems.
Some political poems are good, but usually they do nothing for me.
That’s me, not the poem.
I liked your other two.
You got me to write a poem, though, Sarah, mediocre but a poem, so thanks for that x
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Cry in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m not so keen on political poems.
Some political poems are good, but usually they do nothing for me.
That’s me, not the poem.
You got me to write a poem, though, Sarah, mediocre but a poem, so thanks for that x
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sceptical guy started the topic Silence in the forum Art, poetry, music and film 8 years, 5 months ago
Inside
Silence
At the slowly beating centre
Watching, assessing, judging, caring;
Outside
Desire, frustration, aggression, violence, pain.
Outside
Rain, wind, thunder,
Sunshine, grass, river.
Inside
At the slowly beating centre
Silence.
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Do or die… in the forum Getting serious 8 years, 5 months ago
I knew someone who had been in Yugoslavia during the last war. A very very nasty war in that country, with a million killed.
He was fighting with the Partisans – the Communist forces under Tito.
He told me that once he was with a group of partisans in a cave as German soldiers were searching just outside. They had a German prisoner with them,…[Read more]
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Do or die… in the forum Getting serious 8 years, 5 months ago
I knew someone who had been in Yugoslavia during the last war. A very very nasty war in that country, with a million killed.
He was fighting with the Partisans – the Communist forces under Tito.
He told me that once he was with a group of partisans in a cave as German soldiers were searching just outside. They had a German prisoner with them,…[Read more]
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sceptical guy replied to the topic Do or die… in the forum Getting serious 8 years, 5 months ago
I knew someone who had been in Yugoslavia during the last war. A very very nasty war in that country, with a million killed.
He was fighting with the Partisans – the Communist forces under Tito.
He told me that once he was with a group of partisans in a cave as German soldiers were searching just outside. They had a German prisoner with them,…[Read more]
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