Forget Me Not

I seem to be in a near terminal state of confusion, could someone please enlighten me before my head explodes (too late)

just read your poem and it was ace, it’s official you rock! all that I can write is blatantly bad and/or depressing, but truth be told I’m much better at creative writing.

Nooo! now you’ve just made it look as though I’ve inserted a random comment for no reason whatsoever. Anyway I am fine ta for asking

Recently I’ve been to Alcudia, in the North of Majorca (which can also be spelt Mallorca), RR was just saying that she had just been out with a few of her Majorcan friends and has decided to use some Majorcan phrases in her post, any clearer now? (also the revelation that I’m a guy)

Damn straight!!!

WTF?

wait? you talking to me? Why does everyone refer to me as though I’m female?

wait are you being sarcastic? Or am I being sarcastic about being sarcastic… about being sarcastic or something… could you repeat the question please?

sure it is :roll:

Since when was ‘drunked’ a word, unless I’m seeing double… again
If it’s a pantomime then why aren’t there more musical numbers and dance routines?

I’m usually very sarcastic IRL tend not to be on here… weird

ooh can I be stage director, love a bit of theatre I do

sure you can :roll: :wink:

Minotaur

The laughter of Gods
rings out hollow
across an empty stage
taunting my existance
denying my dreams
refusing me rest
spreading unease

but in the distance
something graces the horizon
a friend and salvation?
or just torment, damnation?

I turn and reach out
yet stumble and fall
crawling in ignorance
on all fours
a beast, not a…[Read more]

@Cymorill wrote:

@Forget Me Not wrote:

@Cymorill wrote:

^^ that is NOT haiku. That is just a sentance broken up into three lines.

These are haiku..

The world? Moonlit
Drops shaken
From the crane’s bill.

Dogen

Another, more traditional one ..

in tree shade
dwelling with a butterfly…
friends in a previous life

Kobayashi Issa

You are mis…

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you don’t need to add them yourself, Bill Oddie doe it for you (I will never look at a stag beetle the same way again)

@Pete wrote:

I knew that :?

come on Pete, give us a poem

@cath 55 wrote:

Pain has an element of blank;
It cannot recollect
When it began, or if there were
A day when it was not.

It has no future but itself,
It’s infinite realms contain
Its past, enlightened to percieve
New periods of pain.

Emily Dickenson

Eeeek!!! :shock: it has to be your own poem!!!! [-X (but I forgives ya)

@Cymorill wrote:

^^ that is NOT haiku. That is just a sentance broken up into three lines.

These are haiku..

The world? Moonlit
Drops shaken
From the crane’s bill.

Dogen

Another, more traditional one ..

in tree shade
dwelling with a butterfly…
friends in a previous life

Kobayashi Issa

You are mistaken
a haiku is of three lines
beat fiv…[Read more]

*gobsmacked*

I think that I will
just stick to writing haikus
as they look awesome