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that  wasn’t directed at you sg

I write crap poetry, I am mental and thick. I’m probably still funnier and better looking than you are. but I write my poetry cos it really means something to me. I have passion and feeling what do you do? appeal to the masses are you trying to imitate the greats? oh you fool you need to realise you cant ever write what has been written before. if…[Read more]

Good job he’s already dead or he’d have thrown himself out the winda lol

Anyway my point is everyone writes for different reasons and I’m glad you decided not to go into too much detail over what defines and good or a bad poem and use an analogy instead.  EastEnders is total crap, I’d like to think of myself more as Emmerdale, which is apt since…[Read more]

Awww Doris xxx I told you, room one is empty we could fill it with numpties.  We could make a better world, we’d have to chuck stapler out of it though – but he’s been flashing his t shirt in room 3 lately so that may not be a problem.  Ask Martin if he will change the name from Room 1 to Mizzy’s Room I’m sure he will as he loves me (he has ne…[Read more]

Sheepy Poem

Here’s a poem about some sheep,

You think of them whilst trying to sleep,

About they jump and have a laugh,

Occasionally they will have a barf.

They stand they stare they grin at grass,

Are not aware of time go past,

Munching happy eating ground,

Quite content to stand around.

In the fields they barrrr away,

They’ve…[Read more]

Thank you Nice xx  You are a good friend to me.

SG you say:

I hate to say this, but it doesn’t make a good, or even an acceptable, poem. It’s certainly a poem whihc is personally important, but I know of poems rejected as totally inadequate despite the great personal importance for the poet, and the editor said openly she felt really bad abou…[Read more]

Thank you both for your comments.  I appreciate positive criticism.  I do not believe that every single poem written should always contain ‘depth’, I often write hoping to amuse.  It is a personal choice whether a person enjoys reading poetry about religion politics and other meaty topics.   You can’t win them all. My poetry suits my pers…[Read more]

well It was supposed to be a funny poem to make people laugh.  Due to your comment I wont be posting up anything ever again.  Also never heard of ‘yello’.

Cheers and FU

Thank you xx

so does that mean you cant chat in the rooms?

how do you mean gagged? and which guide? I’ve never been gagged and I’m quite gobby. Are you sure you weren’t naughty? lol xxx