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Paranoid is the breakthrough second album by British heavy metal band Black Sabbath, released in 1970; it soon topped the British music charts. Widely regarded as one of the pioneering recordings in heavy metal, the album established some of the conventions of the genre. The album was originally titled War Pigs but the record company changed it to Paranoid because of sensitivity about the Vietnam War.*
Jeez, I’m s’posed to have a heavy metal adviser and I end up finding this shit out for myself. It’s true what they say, you just can’t get the staff anymore.
* en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Paranoid_(album)
It must be a dog training school. I had a collie called Buffy. Very obedient, she was. Well done, Slayer. :D
Coventry’s 70s brown away strip:
:D Still the original and still the best, since 2003.
@beeker wrote:
is to turn it up a notch this year :wink: 8)
smoking more
drinking more
partying more
eating more
general hellraising more 8)
Nice plan.
If repression has indeed been the fundamental link between power, knowledge, and sexuality since the classical age, it stands to reason that we will not be able to free ourselves from it except at a considerable cost.
Michel Foucault
Tosh. Tosh, I say. Keegan’s era proved that Newcastle have the potential to be as big as any club in Britain. There were as many mags shirts being worn around the country then as there are Chelsea shirts now. The right man could do well there.
Life is a great suprise. I do not see why death should not be an even greater one.
Vladimir Nabokov:D Nice tits.
I think it’s very good. There’s some good, strong imagery there. On the constructive criticism side, I’d pay more attention to tempo and form. I noticed you lost your initial rhyming couplet in the second verse (go and more). I’d say in this poem you either need to sustain it throughout or forget about it entirely and concentrate on language. Also, I’d be wary of mixing language. There seems to me to be an incongruence in the language that doesn’t sit too well between the street, for example toke, and the classical, say minuet. I’d say pick one and stick to it.
Hope this helps. :D
