William_A_Edge

Reading the above-William

@crazy chick wrote:

can’t remember :(

when was the last time you relaxed, n chilled out :D :D

Last Night

When was the last time you spoke freely to a stranger

Hi Oss
I do think once you start changing a poem you will never be satisfied with it again ,please don’t use this but it could have read

But personaly I would keep it the way it is -William :)

A PM I had off a wonderful person

@angel* wrote:

:shock: Never!! :lol:

When was the last time you fantasised about someone?

All the time

When was the last time you went shoping for yourself only

@Robyn wrote:

December

When was the last time you had sex?

In the celestrial world ,about every 30 minutes

Alas in the real world I have not enough fingers to count

Hi Crazy(not really)Chick
Why were you up so late playing with the keys ,when you cud av bin in bed playing with sum fink more satisfying , a Teddy Bear ? :D :D :D

Hi Pam
Your teachers saying is a bit like “I forgot to remember to forgett”-William :D :D

She’s not really crazy , in fact far from it :oops:

Shes all heart (Well so Mr Angel 1 says) 8)

I like it Oss , lose’s its flow a little in the centre ,but that apart it is great and very topical-William

A wonderful theme and canter , on such a beautiful subject-William :)

NOW :oops:

When was the last time you had flowers bought for you :?

Thanx for reading , I suppose this is more a rhyme than a poem though-William

I love your logic Tommy brilliant :x

The thing is I have not had a comment from either yourself or Owen till now and was not sure :?

Well Sgt Pepper ,you really went into this deeply but cleverly you disguised the fact that you were leaving all ends open , in other words inconclusive as of course all forms of art, that is precisely why it is called art ,it is self expression – William

If only I’d known you then :oops: -Love William

Sorry Tommy , I could not make out weither your coment is for me or Owen :? William

Thats fine Mr Ka£h
To me it’s my life
To you I’m tra£h

How sweet ,but how very final , no one else gets a look in (only joking)
it is a nice straight forward very matter of fact poem-Love William :)