William_A_Edge

Well it sure works-Love William :)

Of course you are right , however I have never and will never kill or harm any living creature-to get rid of the squirrels in my loft I traped them and releashed them in the hills -Regards William

How nice , thats a lovely dream , but like most dreams it ended in a horrible way , shame on those dream directors LOL-Love William :)

Like a lot of creatures squirrel’s are a nuisence , I had them nesting in my loft some while back and it took ages to get rid .But we must never forget we encroached on their land-Love William :wink:

Once more I thank thee maiden for thy critique of mt humble work ,before thee I kneel ,thus I will not rise till thee permit – I can just hear you now saying soppy sod-Love William :roll:

Thanx so much ,give mine a knock sometime LOL-Love William :oops:

Ta ever so for the pic’s and advice , where do you get your fantastic pic’s from-Love William :) [/i]

A great poem that for me had every emotion somewhere inside , I am glad you posted it here though , it is rather fast on the image site(but you know that don’t you) are well thanks for a great read-Love William :)

Sounds like someone is a very lucky person LOL- this too is very good-Love William :)

I thought you said you can’t write poetry , this is brill Angel-Love William :)

No Angel , most of my poems are alerted by something I have seen or read , I just then adapt to suit -Have a nice day -Love William :)

I really enjoyed this simple but effective poem-William :)

I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)

What a wonderful walk I just had , Love and beauty all the way-Love William :)

Wow now I have two Angels amongst my associates , why am I so lucky-Love William :)

Thank you so much,this means a lot to me-Love William :)

While I realise folk are intitled to their opinion once you change a poem to suit another it is no longer yours , for poetry like any other medium is the thoughts of the author ,how the author sees it is the only way , other wise there is no point , we would all write exactly the same