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4 March, 2006 at 8:42 am #200987
@angel* wrote:
@william_a_edge wrote:
Youre up early Angel ,hows your knee
Love William xxgrrrrrr at being up early! I couldn’t sleep, been up since 6.30am, my knee isn’t too bad thank you, a bit sore but I’ll live, I think my pride was dented more :oops: :lol: At least I can bend it better today :D Anyway there are the pro’s of being up early, I’ve done all my laundry and my bungalow is all spic and span, just my ironing to do and that’s me set for a relaxing weekend 8)
Your up early too……or is this normal for you? xx
I hit the wrong quote da da da de de de :D/
4 March, 2006 at 8:40 am #200986@angel* wrote:
I wish more ppl had gud manners! Nice one William x
I get up when I wake ,but it is normaly early ,I cant lie in bed awake ,funny man I hear you saying-Love William xx
4 March, 2006 at 8:09 am #200984
Youre up early Angel ,hows your knee
Love William xx4 March, 2006 at 7:02 am #201095
Mj they are ok ,if you feel good about them then that is all that matters ,poetry is what you feel , when others read it they may see something different to what was intended , but that is what it’s all about .
This is just a hint , the verse about the fish wife , take each line and make a verse arond that ( thay don’t have to rhyme you know) then you would have a longer more in depth poem ,keep writing, it makes you feel good-Love William xx3 March, 2006 at 11:24 pm #200772
Your welcome Stevie ,I hope you took them in the spirit they were meant-Love William xx3 March, 2006 at 11:08 pm #200770
Hi Stevenage
I like your poem it is quite sweet ,just one note I think maybe one more stanza between the second and last would have really nailed it
Love William xxx3 March, 2006 at 11:00 pm #200614@angelwolf00 wrote:
William I am going to pen you the “Knight-Writer”!!

~ Knight Writer ~
Who is he? this wordsmith
we all most admire
Who writes with such passion,
such sweetness and fire.He inspires our love
and offers us hope
Expressing the sorrows
we’ve all come to know.The rain in the desert
the sun in the dark
He brightens the corners
of our shadowed hearts.In the wink of an eye
with the wave of his wand
The magic of dreams
he weaves into song.He fills us with wonder
again and again
As the music of heaven
flows through his pen.Who is the Knight Writer?
This angel of prose
Who’s rescued our spirits
and captured our souls…

Angelwolf
Thank you ,I shall treasure this for ever
Love William xxx3 March, 2006 at 6:42 pm #200761
:D :D :D :D AW are you really bored ,pity your over the other side of the pond-William3 March, 2006 at 6:35 pm #197125
I should hope you did too JayneTake your time you are your own person
Love William xx
3 March, 2006 at 2:13 pm #186781@angel* wrote:
Im feeling pretty stupid today……..I fell UP the stairs at work earlier, really banged my knee, it’s all bruised and I can’t bend it properly……I’m such a clumsy clott :oops:
I hope your OK ,the general rule is to fall down not up ,but I don’t want you to fall at all-William xxx
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