Youre up early Angel ,hows your knee
Love William xx
grrrrrr at being up early! I couldn’t sleep, been up since 6.30am, my knee isn’t too bad thank you, a bit sore but I’ll live, I think my pride was dented more :oops: :lol: At least I can bend it better today :D Anyway there are the pro’s of being up early, I’ve done all my laundry and my bungalow is all spic and span, just my ironing to do and that’s me set for a relaxing weekend 8)
Mj they are ok ,if you feel good about them then that is all that matters ,poetry is what you feel , when others read it they may see something different to what was intended , but that is what it’s all about .
This is just a hint , the verse about the fish wife , take each line and make a verse arond that ( thay don’t have to rhyme you know) then you would have a longer more in depth poem ,keep writing, it makes you feel good-Love William xx
Hi Stevenage
I like your poem it is quite sweet ,just one note I think maybe one more stanza between the second and last would have really nailed it
Love William xxx
Im feeling pretty stupid today……..I fell UP the stairs at work earlier, really banged my knee, it’s all bruised and I can’t bend it properly……I’m such a clumsy clott :oops:
I hope your OK ,the general rule is to fall down not up ,but I don’t want you to fall at all-William xxx