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I like it Oss , lose’s its flow a little in the centre ,but that apart it is great and very topical-William

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A wonderful theme and canter , on such a beautiful subject-William :)

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NOW :oops:

When was the last time you had flowers bought for you :?

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Thanx for reading , I suppose this is more a rhyme than a poem though-William

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I love your logic Tommy brilliant :x

The thing is I have not had a comment from either yourself or Owen till now and was not sure :?

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Well Sgt Pepper ,you really went into this deeply but cleverly you disguised the fact that you were leaving all ends open , in other words inconclusive as of course all forms of art, that is precisely why it is called art ,it is self expression – William

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If only I’d known you then :oops: -Love William

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Sorry Tommy , I could not make out weither your coment is for me or Owen :? William

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Thats fine Mr Ka£h
To me it’s my life
To you I’m tra£h

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How sweet ,but how very final , no one else gets a look in (only joking)
it is a nice straight forward very matter of fact poem-Love William :)

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