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@william_a_edge wrote:

I was slightly disapointed when I realised the poem was not yours , I like the way it uses the coming and going of different elements in conjuntion with the coming and going of love-Love William :)

I only wish I could write poetry like that William xx

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@temptress wrote:

:D hiya angel xxxx wasnt so much the two faces it was more the hideing behind laughter as a defense, things arnt as bad when you make others smile and laugh, until they arnt there and your left alone with who you really are and what troubles you. I guess people deal with things in different ways, its just one of the ways some people cope with the shyte that gets thrown at them :wink:

:-s waffle over lol

I know exactly where your comin from darlin……and I’m bloody lovin your new siggy pic :wink:

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@oss wrote:

TEAR DROP

It’s not often you see me
Apart from when emotions run high
Extreme moments of sadness
Outrageous moments of joy
When I do appear
My journey is not long
The sight of me though
Brings attention to my host
I can be brushed aside
Even soaked up
Released from the eye
Just left to drop
See right through me you can
For I
I am just a tear drop.

G.J.Smith

You to a tee oss xx

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Very erotic poem there William…..certainly woke me up :oops: :lol:

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@william_a_edge wrote:

While I realise folk are intitled to their opinion once you change a poem to suit another it is no longer yours , for poetry like any other medium is the thoughts of the author ,how the author sees it is the only way , other wise there is no point , we would all write exactly the same

Agreed :)

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Another gud one William, I liked this verse..

It seems the cow that it came from
When shot was against a wire fence
This left a lasting impression
On the hide,and remains there hence :lol:

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Very good William, made me chuckle…….I have to go to the Dentist very soon aswell :lol:

Welcome to the boards…..look forward to reading more of your work :D

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@james Belfast wrote:

@angel* wrote:

@james Belfast wrote:

I am confused (not difficult). Is Oss G J Smith? Yes or No please.

Yes James, oss is G J Smith……that’s his real name hun, and he does write his own poetry

Ok thanks angel. Technically, I suppose his poetry is rough around the edges (what do I know?) but it is certainly emotional and tells us what the real Oss is like so, from that aspect, it is impressive stuff. I had him ‘pigeonholed’ as a lightweight who took photographs of his eyes and so on – looks like I need to reassess my opinions eh? We live and learn….sorry Oss. Jeez, I wonder if I’ve got anyone else in the wrong pigeonhole???

LOL James I wouldn’t worry about it hun, there’s alot more to oss than most ppl realise, wot we see on the boards is a tiny fraction of his personality, I don’t even think he know’s who the real him is at times :lol:

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@pats wrote:

these song lyrics always remind me of my son.

Every night in my dreams
I see you. I feel you.
That is how I know you go on.

Far across the distance
And spaces between us
You have come to show you go on.

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you’re here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Love can touch us one time
And last for a lifetime
And never go till we’re one

Love was when I loved you
One true time I hold to
In my life we’ll always go on

Near, far, wherever you are
I believe that the heart does go on
Once more you open the door
And you’re here in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

There is some love that will not
go away

You’re here, there’s nothing I fear,
And I know that my heart will go on
We’ll stay forever this way
You are safe in my heart
And my heart will go on and on

Always love that song pats xx

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I’m no critic CCV…..totally get part 1 and loved it…….will re-read part 2……nice to see something different on here :)

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